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EE英语课堂❤️ 雅思托福写作Tips
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1. Don't use contractions.
用Do not 来代替Don't
have / has not 代替 haven't / hasn't
would not 代替 wouldn't 等等
2. 避免使用 There is /are
例句
There are many development projects that UN suspects.
改为: The UN suspects many development projects. (这句much stronger and to the point)
3. Avoid words ( really, very , so, a lot of)
, find out stronger words.
Many students think university is very hard.
(用difficult代替very hard)
Bill 399 is really controversial. (去掉really会formal和better些)
A lot of time is wasted. (不可数用much代替 a lot of, 如果可数用many代替)
4. 尽量用active voice 代替passive voice
The war was won by the French.
改为
The French won the war.
5. 用 strong verbs
weak verb: He gave assistance to my friend.
strong verb: He assisted my friend.
weak verb: conducted a investigation
strong verb: investigated
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